Post by ValkyrieRose on Mar 6, 2014 4:39:44 GMT
Well... Hello to everyone here. Names ValkyrieRose, but you guys can call me Val or Rose, whatever suits your taste. I have been working on a fiction regarding Death Note mode, so i thought I would share the first chapter with you all today. I try to make my fictions light hearted, yet serious at the same time, and some will fine how I'm writing this quirky but...i do so hope you all enjoy this. I understand it's probably not the best but...Well, here it is!
Fade into Red
Chapter 1: Fate
Warning: Dead body located on the premises. Advanced program analysis highly suggest linkings to the 'Kira' case; saving video feed from just before the event. Facility has been locked down until This System's authorities can be reached. Highly recommended all personnel withhold real names.
That announcement is what eventually woke me up me up from my all too peaceful slumber. I raised my head, looking at the empty classroom stretched around me. It took me a few minutes to piece together why I was the only one here... everyone else left, meaning that school was done for the day. That shook me up, and I hurried out of my seat, putting everything I had in my bag, and was prepared to leave, when I thought back to what woke me up.
'That's right, that announcement. One of the teacher's was found in the courtyard... and Kira was suspected of doing it...' I thought back to the information about Kira. The god that rose up to deal divine judgment on those who sinned against others.... every criminal judged by Kira has died of a heart attack. And now, Kira, coming from the English 'killer', was now out and about in this school, supposedly.
Oh, so you noticed I called Kira a god? Good, because what I honestly think of him. Kira has always judged the unfair, and that's personally more than anyone has every done. Those that the law couldn't touch, like corrupt politicians, right down to murderous stalkers, met the same end. I still remember the day I was attacked by a group of thugs, our for money and lust and what knows what. I came out of that with minor scrapes and my virtue intact, but after they were displayed on the news for assaulting some poor girl...executed.
OK, so I suppose I should get to explaining myself. My name is Miku Sahashi. I'm a lovely woman, seventeen years old, and while I may not like to brag, I hold a lot of influence with the school. My hair is a neat, flowing natural silver, and I have it neatly ties into a braid most of the time, to keep it out of my eyes. While I'm stuck in this stupid school uniform, my choice of clothing is usually something black, which shows off just enough to keep those interested in me. Some call me a 'seductress', but that's all in your point of view. I have few special talents I call my own.. but doubtless, you didn't come here to read about me and my looks? Or , if you did, I’ll refer you to my website!
Er...right...the story....
So, after I thought about what this could mean I figured my best course of action would be to check the entrance, and see if the doors were actually locked. If they were... I'd be a very bored person. I have my music, I suppose, and I could always go read a book in the library. But what if... what if Kira was stuck here inside with me?
Before I could contemplate the full implications of that, I heard a loud, girlish shriek coming from outside my room, which spurred me into finding out the source of it. It didn't take me too long to find it, it was coming from the courtyard.
As I stepped into the courtyard, a large gobble of people were already gathered, and each of them had a distinct hair style. Around the center of the courtyard was the subject of the announcement... a dead body lying there, and some of the students were huddled around. The source of the scream had, apparently, been a brown haired guy in the corner, who was still cowering in fear.
“So you see anything about it?” One of the guys near me had asked. His hairstyle was short, bobbed red, and it looked kind of creepy, to be honest. His voice was quiet, yet bold, as if he wanted people to hear him but was unsure how to make that happen.
He was talking to a boy with bright orange haired, and was wearing a pair of sunglasses. No, really... he was wearing sunglasses. At night. What a douche... Anyway, he was kneeling against the body and said. “I can't find anything that looks like a knife mark, or anything else.:”
“Well, that announcement said it was Kira,so it makes sense that he'd dead thanks to a heart attack, right?” Came a voice from across the field, to where a Purple Haired girl was staring at the group of students. She looked rather like a princess. I knew her well. Her name was Minami Kirishima, and we somewhat got along... like two actresses got along on stage, but then try to kill each other off of it. Me and Minami were two of the more popular girls. I wonder if she had a grudge against me?
“It doesn't matter, does it?” Came YET another voice, and a pink haired girl with goggles spoke up. “We're stuck in here with a sociopath killer, right? That lunatic could kill us all!”
The purple haired girl nodded and agreement, and I forced back a retort. I had to keep my mouth shut on my support of Kira. I was in line to be labeled as an up and coming actress, and I couldn't risk damaging my chances at my career getting ruined. The purple haired girl continued. “I wouldn't let that insane maniac around at all... Maybe I'll call my dad and tell him what's going on.” She said, reaching for a PDA
I looked around for more people There were three guys in the corner talking to themselves- a purple haired one, a green haired one, and a blonde headed. They seemed lost in their world, like the newly found corpse didn't have the slightest effect on them at all.
My attention returned to The CSI nut-job and the Red haired one, and they were talking about what they had heard about the Kira case, which was pretty standard stuff. Neither gave away anything that would mark them as a worshiper, like myself. However, the Red Haired one turned to look at me “Suzuki, you're here too?”
...Oh right, another thing you didn't know. Due to that whole acting career thing I mentioned, I have a fake last name. The agent I had been speaking with told me it was because Suzuki was a common name, and changing it would market me better, so that's the name I've been going by. Try not to forget, okay?
“This was a rare day, but I slept through class.” I said. I bonked myself on the head, closed my eyes and stuck my tongue out like a Moe klutz. He nodded in understanding. “That IS rare, and the worst time for it to happen.
“That's for sure”I agreed, It was my job to be civil to everyone, so most of what I say usually went along those lines.
“Oh, COME ON-” Came a shout, and we all turned towards the source. It was the purple haired girl, suddenly pressing furiously. “Hey Dad, you there? Dad?....whatever, when you get this, come help us. We're locked in the school, and the computers seem to think it was Kira. I don't want to be stuck in here with some psycho, so hurry up and-!:
There was a small pause in her voice and I wasn't the only one to come to confusion when she did. It continued for a moment, in which the PDA promptly fell out of her hands.. We all stood in stunned silence as we watched her fall to her knees, and collapse to the ground.
Of course, everyone scurried over to her, the guy with Sunglasses shouting 'Hey, are you okay? Answer me?”
There was no answer. The creepy red haired one walked over, and tapped a finger to her neck. “...No pulse at all...”
The Brown haired girl promptly shouted. “What? She's DEAD? Was it a h-h-h-heart attack? Does that mean it's K-k-k-”
“Interesting.” Came a voice, sounding all crackly and robotic, coming over the intercom. “I don't recall you killing people just because they call you a maniac, Kira... or could it be just because You're angry you've been pushed this far?”
“Hey, what do you mean?” The Sunglasses guy called out. “What's going on?”
“You can call me...Fate.” Came the crackling voice. “I'm the person whose going to catch Kira after it's all settled. Kira, I've tracked you here and, tonight, I will you.”
“Tracked? You mean you knew he was here?” I called out.
“Oh yes, the time of the criminals on the news used to correspond with the schedule of a student, before he began mixing up his tactics. Nonetheless, the pattern of the first set of killings can not be ignored. I'll go ahead and reveal the first card in my hand. Kira, I knew you would be here, because I knew you would kill Mister Kishimoto on the floor over there. After all, he was recently spotlighted as a suspect for a murder case, as well as wanted for several charges of fraud... I also know that you know I was following me, which means you deliberately trapped yourself in this school.”
“Woha woha woha.” I said, trying to slow things down a bit, as I shouted out to the mysterious corpse. “Okay Mister Detective person, why would you think Kira would trap himself in this school, knowingly.”
“To serve as an arena, of course. I almost captured Kira once before., and he lost something incredibly precious to him. Now, I assume he's bitter and is hoping to take care of me and recover his precious object all in one go..”
“Kira... I know you're there. I've seen yet another death, which more than proves that you are still trapped within these walls.. I WILL find you. When I do, I'll personally bring you to justice.”
This 'Fate' had everyone's undivided attention. The boys were talking to themselves were now staring at the speaker, Sunglasses had dropped the corpse to listen. Then, at once people began eying each other.
I couldn't help but do the same thing my eyes shifting from person to person. One of these people had a magnificent secret. One of them was Kira, the god I so worshiped. And now, he was locked in a battle to the death against the other. Should Fate find his identity,the police would descend upon them and, should Kira learn Fate's identity, he would be no more.
I checked my PDA. The time said 7 P.M. By protocol, the doors to the school were to open in 11 hours.
I gave a slight smile and sat down on the bench. Oh yes, this was going to be interesting.
Chapter 1- Fate- End
Well, thank you for reading this. Can you guess who everyone is before they're revealed, I wonder? As standard, there is one Kira, one eyes, and one Detective... can YOU guess who they are?
If you enjoyed this, let me know! Reviews ae a writers bread n butter, after all.
Fade into Red
Chapter 1: Fate
Warning: Dead body located on the premises. Advanced program analysis highly suggest linkings to the 'Kira' case; saving video feed from just before the event. Facility has been locked down until This System's authorities can be reached. Highly recommended all personnel withhold real names.
That announcement is what eventually woke me up me up from my all too peaceful slumber. I raised my head, looking at the empty classroom stretched around me. It took me a few minutes to piece together why I was the only one here... everyone else left, meaning that school was done for the day. That shook me up, and I hurried out of my seat, putting everything I had in my bag, and was prepared to leave, when I thought back to what woke me up.
'That's right, that announcement. One of the teacher's was found in the courtyard... and Kira was suspected of doing it...' I thought back to the information about Kira. The god that rose up to deal divine judgment on those who sinned against others.... every criminal judged by Kira has died of a heart attack. And now, Kira, coming from the English 'killer', was now out and about in this school, supposedly.
Oh, so you noticed I called Kira a god? Good, because what I honestly think of him. Kira has always judged the unfair, and that's personally more than anyone has every done. Those that the law couldn't touch, like corrupt politicians, right down to murderous stalkers, met the same end. I still remember the day I was attacked by a group of thugs, our for money and lust and what knows what. I came out of that with minor scrapes and my virtue intact, but after they were displayed on the news for assaulting some poor girl...executed.
OK, so I suppose I should get to explaining myself. My name is Miku Sahashi. I'm a lovely woman, seventeen years old, and while I may not like to brag, I hold a lot of influence with the school. My hair is a neat, flowing natural silver, and I have it neatly ties into a braid most of the time, to keep it out of my eyes. While I'm stuck in this stupid school uniform, my choice of clothing is usually something black, which shows off just enough to keep those interested in me. Some call me a 'seductress', but that's all in your point of view. I have few special talents I call my own.. but doubtless, you didn't come here to read about me and my looks? Or , if you did, I’ll refer you to my website!
Er...right...the story....
So, after I thought about what this could mean I figured my best course of action would be to check the entrance, and see if the doors were actually locked. If they were... I'd be a very bored person. I have my music, I suppose, and I could always go read a book in the library. But what if... what if Kira was stuck here inside with me?
Before I could contemplate the full implications of that, I heard a loud, girlish shriek coming from outside my room, which spurred me into finding out the source of it. It didn't take me too long to find it, it was coming from the courtyard.
As I stepped into the courtyard, a large gobble of people were already gathered, and each of them had a distinct hair style. Around the center of the courtyard was the subject of the announcement... a dead body lying there, and some of the students were huddled around. The source of the scream had, apparently, been a brown haired guy in the corner, who was still cowering in fear.
“So you see anything about it?” One of the guys near me had asked. His hairstyle was short, bobbed red, and it looked kind of creepy, to be honest. His voice was quiet, yet bold, as if he wanted people to hear him but was unsure how to make that happen.
He was talking to a boy with bright orange haired, and was wearing a pair of sunglasses. No, really... he was wearing sunglasses. At night. What a douche... Anyway, he was kneeling against the body and said. “I can't find anything that looks like a knife mark, or anything else.:”
“Well, that announcement said it was Kira,so it makes sense that he'd dead thanks to a heart attack, right?” Came a voice from across the field, to where a Purple Haired girl was staring at the group of students. She looked rather like a princess. I knew her well. Her name was Minami Kirishima, and we somewhat got along... like two actresses got along on stage, but then try to kill each other off of it. Me and Minami were two of the more popular girls. I wonder if she had a grudge against me?
“It doesn't matter, does it?” Came YET another voice, and a pink haired girl with goggles spoke up. “We're stuck in here with a sociopath killer, right? That lunatic could kill us all!”
The purple haired girl nodded and agreement, and I forced back a retort. I had to keep my mouth shut on my support of Kira. I was in line to be labeled as an up and coming actress, and I couldn't risk damaging my chances at my career getting ruined. The purple haired girl continued. “I wouldn't let that insane maniac around at all... Maybe I'll call my dad and tell him what's going on.” She said, reaching for a PDA
I looked around for more people There were three guys in the corner talking to themselves- a purple haired one, a green haired one, and a blonde headed. They seemed lost in their world, like the newly found corpse didn't have the slightest effect on them at all.
My attention returned to The CSI nut-job and the Red haired one, and they were talking about what they had heard about the Kira case, which was pretty standard stuff. Neither gave away anything that would mark them as a worshiper, like myself. However, the Red Haired one turned to look at me “Suzuki, you're here too?”
...Oh right, another thing you didn't know. Due to that whole acting career thing I mentioned, I have a fake last name. The agent I had been speaking with told me it was because Suzuki was a common name, and changing it would market me better, so that's the name I've been going by. Try not to forget, okay?
“This was a rare day, but I slept through class.” I said. I bonked myself on the head, closed my eyes and stuck my tongue out like a Moe klutz. He nodded in understanding. “That IS rare, and the worst time for it to happen.
“That's for sure”I agreed, It was my job to be civil to everyone, so most of what I say usually went along those lines.
“Oh, COME ON-” Came a shout, and we all turned towards the source. It was the purple haired girl, suddenly pressing furiously. “Hey Dad, you there? Dad?....whatever, when you get this, come help us. We're locked in the school, and the computers seem to think it was Kira. I don't want to be stuck in here with some psycho, so hurry up and-!:
There was a small pause in her voice and I wasn't the only one to come to confusion when she did. It continued for a moment, in which the PDA promptly fell out of her hands.. We all stood in stunned silence as we watched her fall to her knees, and collapse to the ground.
Of course, everyone scurried over to her, the guy with Sunglasses shouting 'Hey, are you okay? Answer me?”
There was no answer. The creepy red haired one walked over, and tapped a finger to her neck. “...No pulse at all...”
The Brown haired girl promptly shouted. “What? She's DEAD? Was it a h-h-h-heart attack? Does that mean it's K-k-k-”
“Interesting.” Came a voice, sounding all crackly and robotic, coming over the intercom. “I don't recall you killing people just because they call you a maniac, Kira... or could it be just because You're angry you've been pushed this far?”
“Hey, what do you mean?” The Sunglasses guy called out. “What's going on?”
“You can call me...Fate.” Came the crackling voice. “I'm the person whose going to catch Kira after it's all settled. Kira, I've tracked you here and, tonight, I will you.”
“Tracked? You mean you knew he was here?” I called out.
“Oh yes, the time of the criminals on the news used to correspond with the schedule of a student, before he began mixing up his tactics. Nonetheless, the pattern of the first set of killings can not be ignored. I'll go ahead and reveal the first card in my hand. Kira, I knew you would be here, because I knew you would kill Mister Kishimoto on the floor over there. After all, he was recently spotlighted as a suspect for a murder case, as well as wanted for several charges of fraud... I also know that you know I was following me, which means you deliberately trapped yourself in this school.”
“Woha woha woha.” I said, trying to slow things down a bit, as I shouted out to the mysterious corpse. “Okay Mister Detective person, why would you think Kira would trap himself in this school, knowingly.”
“To serve as an arena, of course. I almost captured Kira once before., and he lost something incredibly precious to him. Now, I assume he's bitter and is hoping to take care of me and recover his precious object all in one go..”
“Kira... I know you're there. I've seen yet another death, which more than proves that you are still trapped within these walls.. I WILL find you. When I do, I'll personally bring you to justice.”
This 'Fate' had everyone's undivided attention. The boys were talking to themselves were now staring at the speaker, Sunglasses had dropped the corpse to listen. Then, at once people began eying each other.
I couldn't help but do the same thing my eyes shifting from person to person. One of these people had a magnificent secret. One of them was Kira, the god I so worshiped. And now, he was locked in a battle to the death against the other. Should Fate find his identity,the police would descend upon them and, should Kira learn Fate's identity, he would be no more.
I checked my PDA. The time said 7 P.M. By protocol, the doors to the school were to open in 11 hours.
I gave a slight smile and sat down on the bench. Oh yes, this was going to be interesting.
Chapter 1- Fate- End
Well, thank you for reading this. Can you guess who everyone is before they're revealed, I wonder? As standard, there is one Kira, one eyes, and one Detective... can YOU guess who they are?
If you enjoyed this, let me know! Reviews ae a writers bread n butter, after all.